Xperiment New Fiction Survey

I was hoping I could decide if this was worth continuing just on comments, but I’m still on the fence about this one.

For those who missed the first post, I wrote an experimental story in a new format, which combines amateur photos with a narrative, taking the form of a sex blog that’s attempting to nail women like as seen in Reality websites. It’s had some mixed reception. On the one hand, a few people hate it, on the other hand, those same people thus far don’t like anything I’ve written except WoW anyway. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Right now, it’s just a sample chapter which I may alter a bit if I do decide to pick it up. The women will get hotter and the story more detailed as the protagonist continues. It will have an overarching narrative and perhaps even character development. It is very much fiction, but it’s intended to be feasibly real, thus I’m deliberately not picking pornstar images here.

The XXXPeriment – Chapter 1

Let me know what you think below.